The Divine Plan (Short Story)

Jan 31 2008  | Views 315 |  Comments  (10)
"Always thought you were intelligent...didn't you...hmmm...now , when you have a real challenge... Expand

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  Shankar Are posted 5 mnths ago

yashasvi: Thanks for the comment!!



  yashasvi2001 posted 5 mnths ago

ah.... the way you concluded the story is quite interesting

loved it

yashasvi



  Shankar Are posted 5 mnths ago

Hi rmadhuri
                      Thankas for the comment!!



  TSV Hari posted 5 mnths ago

Shankar!

Your short story is very good.

Perhaps you could build up the suspense crescendo a little more by research on what the lines on one's left palm mean.

But your thought itself is profound, no doubt.

I have only praise for your choice of words.

I invoke Dilip Chitre's rendering of Sant Tukaram's immortal words as apposites to your work.

Words are the only Jewels I possess
Words are the only Clothes that I wear
Words are the only food That sustains my life
Words are the only wealth I distribute among people

Cheers!

TSV Hari



  rmadhuri posted 5 mnths ago

Well, sure makes one think!! I'm not much of a temple person either, but anyone who thinks they got everything in their own hands is err.... right ...or not... Brilliant!!! Loved it :)!!!



  Shankar Are posted 5 mnths ago

Hi grahani!
                    I take that as acompliment ! Thnks!



  grahani posted 5 mnths ago

oh -oh that was unexpected



  Shankar Are posted 5 mnths ago

"If what I got is right" - point worth debating. :-) .Gud that you laughed ...thnks for the comment!



  supriyad posted 6 mnths ago

LOL.. Thanks for the laugh. If what I got is right - that was one map-dumb minister there :))





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